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Shore of Dreams

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standing firm
on a shore of dreams,
I tossed caution to the wind

watching hope float
on a sea of promises

 

ebbing with miracles,

wetting toes with possibilities

realization dawned,
knowing; you will come back

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Picture Prompt: http://katrinabc.deviantart.com/art/Miracles-Happen-I-52163878

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  • PageTurner
    June 29, 2008

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    I'm Sure, I'm on that same shore



    Here's Hoping our Dreams come true...



    Dream On, my Friend!

    ~ Nicky♥


    • fortyninereasons gold member
      July 7, 2008
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      I am sure there are quite a few of us on that shore... all standing in a line just waiting. Thank you for stopping by and reading my words. Juls


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Beautiful!
    Every line flows in lovely imagery and metaphor...
    TY for entering this piece...A joy to read

    Lynda


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Why, yes, I do believe that might well make something stand firm on a beach?


  • Cannonsfire
    June 28, 2008
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    Awww beyoootiful

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