Monotonous yet renewed
minuscule memories revisited,
a monumental impact or tiny ripple;
both set flight to life's little whispers
willing instinctual destiny.
Author notes
Prompt:
luminous ball
fulcrum of orbits
sustaining life
numbering our years
la vita è la poesia = life is poetry
A contest entry
- write this, but better by james119.
700 points, ended June 29, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked this until thae last line. It left me hanging. Willing just doesn't fit for me. Maybe something like...interpreting. Hell I dunno. I'm not an editor.
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each cycle of life impacting future events or destiny
seasons of time
'built in' choices
There is a lot to draw from these few words...
I'm sure I didn't dig quite to the core here
It's a nice write
thanks for entering
james -
whoa...you did that off the prompt!
way to write....geesh...that was amazing!
well done ! well done!
ears/Seattle
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