I'm stressed out
[the lights, the sounds, the action]
Hating the world
[aces vs. kings; heads-up]
Need to get away
[get dealt 21 when the dealer has 20]
Where do I go?
[grab some chips from the cashier]
Take a wild guess
[this is my escape zone]
Author notes
I think most of you can figure it out...the casino. Love it...hopefully my life can revolve around it one day. The only place I have that removes me from this world of bullshit. Hope you guys enjoy the structure =) I like how it came out. Any other casino-heads message me, and hope you all enjoy the read! Comments encouraged!
A contest entry
- What big nose you have! by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - show me... your power, your drive by Poetic Drug.
600 points, ended July 10, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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i like the structure of it and the way you make it blunt because that gives it depth too good luck in this contest
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Wow i like this poem alot. Its interestingly written alot differently. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. ..<3.. Shelly
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i like the structure in this one...the whole this is what i need [this is where i get it] thing. it came out well, nice and simple
have fun when you go...remember that A-game =)
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