…leap, but how, where to...
Is now a memory or a dream...?
Catch the journey to reality
where am I? A sudden movement
In front of the mirror, who is that man
why is the wall colored brown
where are the babies…
will there be tomorrow
the sea is sweet, smooth as my life
but meaningless...
…leap, is it deep
are you scared there will be no tomorrow
since tomorrow is today and today is just
a jazzy moment lost in time
what a fog, covering the green of my life
with mystic river vanishing the rainbows
…silence, light a candle it's dark but we are here
I thought that it was far…
I thought that it was hard…
I thought…
never mind, the dawn is ours now
It was only a dream
and the journey is done
And am free again…
Was I a moment?
12:54am
29-june-2008
Comments
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nicely done... and its good to know ur publishing here again...
hehe
well, i can say that this piece is wonderful... it is. the imagery is good... the lack of rhyme suits the dream state....
are you scared there will be no tomorrow
since tomorrow is today and today is just
a jazzy moment lost in time
what a fog, covering the green of my life
with mystic river vanishing the rainbows
this is the best part i liked the most. m not scared there will be no tomorrow. but m scared of the fog covering the GREEN of ur life... i do wonder why....
uncertanity, questions, and a lot of queerness... plain confusing... reading this piece is like being lost in a dream yet at dawn time everything is back to normal... is it? back to normal?
PEACE
**********JOWELL*************
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Masterful Write
Deep concept on whats real, choices..We all seem to come to the bridge of choice in life...
Once I had a dream
I journeyed afar
just to be free
reaching for my star...
I love how you wrote this, it says alot about
the life we live..in dreams or reality
excellent write & read....
novy
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Twas but a dream or mere reality?
Emotions twisted to point of uncertainty.
Twas real tis false and twas false tis real.
Stuck in a dream-like state, watching the world pass by...
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