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hearing my heart--------------------

Are you there in existence at all
this was the question a day before

Where are you now
in this materialistic world?
This is yesterday's inquiry!!!

You are here, hearing my heart
mending my dilapidating  mind
and searching the soul
that flows to the brim,fully  in serenity

That is the truth I realized
today about you My lord!

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    and I am touched to your realisation..that is indeed a touching piece...I like this piece..and thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece..