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Distance

Just as the stars are between sea and sky,
So is distance between you and I,
yet distance cannot keep apart,
two souls joined inside one heart...

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  • DeGraw
    July 9
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    Excellent!

    A simply marvelous pen! Short but complete!
    Regards,
    Jennifer

  • DeGraw
    July 9
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    Excellent!

    A simply marvelous pen! Short but complete!
    Regards,
    Jennifer


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 29

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    Beautiful

    I have always believed when a mother gives birth she gives a pice of her soul to that child .A piece of her light to help light the way for their rejoining in heaven .Lovely write here


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 28

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    what a depth ofl ove you defined here ...just a eternal beauty of love and with its purity as well..well done...

  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 28

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    How well you discribe the feelings of a distand love
    It is true if there`s real love nothing can put it apart
    Blessings
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