They were all there
(completely bare)
Burning in the sun,
nudist, oh! what fun.
They were various ages
it was in the news pages
It's just the bottom line,
they must think it's just fine.
A list of names that read
above each naked head.
Patricia Sue- Shame on you!
Little Larry- To home, don't tarry.
Sandra Lou- What's gotten into you?
Mr. Joe- You should know...
Mrs. Daisy- Are you crazy???
Oh! and Spot You can go!
Author notes
My mother drew a picture that inspired this poem I hope I can post it!
Transatlantic-ism.
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Comments
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cute, hehehe
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I've read and commented on this in the past, but I'm reading it again and laughing again, so I'll comment again
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this is cute...and the picture is awesome. and the rhyming is adorable for any reader.
lol good luck in your contests
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I'm not going to lie this poem is hysterical and cute, this rhyme should be published in a child's rhyme book. Excellent work, and cute picture to tag along x]
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You and your mother did a good job of it with this picture and poem combo; thanks for your entry and good luck
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This is really cute and funny. It even made me laugh when I am having a really bad day. Thanks for entering
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Haha this is cute and soooo funny! One question: for "above each naked head," I think that saying the bodies are naked doesn't mean the heads are, especially since in the picture Mrs. Daisy is wearing a hat... I might just be interpreting that line wrong. Anyways, thanks for the cheerful and humorous poem! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Love the pic! hah, very cute and lighthearted, just what I need to start off the day. Thanks for entering!
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i wouldn't want to be part of that group! thanks for the entry
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Ha! Ha!
This is too cute, and the picture along with it is hilarious!
Your mom is a talented artist if she drew this picture. Thanks for the laugh. Blessings, Patty
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Haha, great picture and great write. This one cracked me up.
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LMAO!!!! This was funny! I like the pic too. Thanks for entering
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Hey, that is a funny picture, looks like something you could frame and put up on the bathroom wall somewhere for laughs.
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Hahahahaha
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Loved this. Very very funny indeed. Well done the writer.
Darkness
Reigns
Wayne Leon
xx
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lol this is cute. big applause for jenniffer!!
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cheeky
LOL, what a cheeky little poem you've produced here inspired by the artwork of your mother. Nice to see a light-hearted collaboration like this. (Like mother, like daughter??)
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Applause Jenifer
This is very well written. Humerous and cute and Mom gets an applause for her drawing. Enjoyed this very much. The Bottom Line (ha ha) Keep on writing....Katie
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THIS PIECE IS CRAZY FUNNY. IT GOES SO VERY WELL WITH THE PICTURE. THE "BOTTOM" LINE (HE-HE-HE). THE FLOW WAS RIGHT ON TIME. AGAIN...I APPLAUD YOU! GOD BLESS YOU!
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Thanks my mom is agreat artist!
She has been my inspiration for all my life. She read poetry to me from the womb! thanks for the comment
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CUTE!!!!
They do stand out among all in our society!
Definitely a different kind of thinking. ;D
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Indeed a thought provoking piece you brought with a depth of the truth..a serious note in the words is hinted..well done....
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Loving the flow and rhyme in this.....brought a smile to my face...well written and well drawn
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