A flower, so weak,
is left on the chest of a
hopeless romantic.
Shoot.
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kind of cliche - but again, a nice image. -
wow you are sure good at this haiku stuff. Very well written.


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you can't help it sometimes, but that is what makes a good work of art, that is comes from something inside, keep it flowing
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oh... i liked this... maybe because in my weakness i hope to have a hopeless romantic to lie my petals on...


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tender. - NANGALEEMA


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