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escape plan


Moon fades to eyes and
all that’s left is a boy who
lost his dream again.


Shoot.

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  • Tangled Angle
    July 24
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    7

    it was a good image, but you're better than this.

  • Duana gold member
    July 12

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    wow this is powerful and sure deserves a trophy. Just excellent. I read this to my husband and he was amazed.

    So how are you doing? I have not heard from you in a long time. I hope all is well.

    You should check out my poetry slam- you might be interested in it.

    Duana


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 29

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    i think that is what happens to me every morning, lol, but i like this poem, keep it flowing my friend

  • going nowhere
    June 29

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    now... i think there is a dream out there still... somewhere... maybe you'll find it again in a sunrise.

    i love how you write... it always makes me think about the meaning and why you wrote it...