The thought of you
Continuously on my mind
Would drive any man mad
But I love it and crave it
The thought of you
Has become my minds drug
I try to just think of you
To realize I need you
The thought of you
Makes my day great
But seeing your face
Would only complete
The thought of you
Keeps me up at night
Even passed midnight
Thinking of how to see you
The thought of you
Has driven me mad I suppose
With only pure love
That is all for you
The thought of you
Would make me do anything
To just see you or hear you
For I miss it so
The thought of you
Makes me realize one thing
That this is true love
And I will always love you
Author notes
To the women I love may I be the thought on her mind
A contest entry
- Lets be Honest by St. Poet.
900 points, ended July 15, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i wish i was that girl...she is lucky to have a great guy like you.
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oh i know exactly
how you feel, for i am going through
the same thing right now.
It's so very hard to "love" someone you can't see, touch , etc.
believe me i know.
I got through these very thoughts every day.
If you have the time and if you want to chack out my poem " Answer my Prayer"
You might it interesting.
Good job in this!
-Mandi
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i no how u feel, its hard. may u be the thught on her mind as u said, she would be lucky.
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Nice write. Somewhat raw, but expresses the emotions well. Nice job.
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Oh how I can relate to this! Technically you may want to think a little about some of the lack of punctuation as it's rather difficult to follow the train of thought in places which is a shame. Sentiments are open and honest, and this has great potential. I do like the rawness of this but I'd also like to be able to fully appreciate it. Be interesting to see if you decide to play with this. Thanks for sharing.
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hey love ya this is heaven ya you are always oooon my mindto so ya iloveyou
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It's a sweet, simple, sentiment. It isn't my style of writing, but I must say that just about anyone can relate to it, and that's what makes it appealing. It reminds me of the first time I fell in love, and how much I thought of her. Anyways, good poem, and good luck in the contest =D
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^^, ehehe... a little too lovely for my taste.
but it was really nice to read... I never thought guys can be also this emotional about these kinds of stuff. Very lovely indeed... nothing too emo just really lovely in its own way. 
blessed be
Blanche
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Iasked for emotion and you gave it to me, Very good job.
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stanza 1 line 4 wat?
that makes no sence. i think you ment to say
but i crave it, but i can't be shure
stanza 3 lne 4 needs an "it" at the end.
other than that nice poem
-it actualy had a faint rhythem!
(unlike so menny of ur others)
i think this is ur second best poem!
Gr8 job, good luck n the contest!
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Abby
tanks for the help ya 1st stanza is fixd but the 3rd is how i want it to be thanks though.
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