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What I've Done

Though you know I love you
Your miles away
Day after day
The loneliness sets in

I tried to be faithful
But my heart grew too lonely
I turned to someone new
To fill that void

Little did I know
Only you could
Fill that void
But I had to find out the hard way

Without you
Here to love  me
After time my heart grew lonely
Tried to fight it, but couldn't

I love you, but your not
Here to hold me and kiss me
And day after day missing you gets harder
Voids must be filled
Even for the strongest of us

Day after day, I will always regret
Opening up to someone new
Not because it was wrong
Even though it was, but because I feel guilty



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I cheated on my fiance and feel like crap

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  • gettingoutofme
    July 9, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this. It was nice and it holds a lot of truth for me. Good luck in the contest.


  • Florida Sunshine
    July 8, 2008

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    Temptation is often very difficult to avoid. -- Your poem is beautifully written -- I do appreciate your entry but it's a round contest -- your name had to be on the list.

    Your welcome to stay but I won't be able to award it. I'll be happy to give you a well deserved shout in the final.

    I'm glad my contest inspired you to write about it.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    July 8, 2008
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    sweety,, your human
    you made a mistake, im sure hewill forgive you
    i love you