I should have never let you go,
not before letting you know,
That I love you..
Should have let everything out,
showed more then just my doubt,
of me and you.
But you see none of that is me,
I'd rather let you be set you free.
Free as a butterfly, to fly away,
I'd keep you, can't make you stay.
I can't fight for what's not mine,
But I'll wait, make up your mind.
You know, and then I act like this,
but then, it always ends with a kiss.
Do what you like.. I am not your brain...
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Expresses well the theme love must be release, and be free to leave. I like the line I can't fight for what's not mine. Expresses both a realization that she can't take love it has to be given freely, and her willingness to accept and protect love given to her willingly. Nice write.
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If you set a bird free, and it comes back, ,,,,then it's yours. Maybe yours will return too
Theres always hope. Strong raw emotions here. Beautiful honesty that allows others to relate. Wonderful, i enjoyed the read!
~n
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I hope so..
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This is really beautiful... sad, but beautiful. I love the way you rhyme, and the phrases you use... I loved the first part. Shya
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Nice !
Loved the way you wrote this.. Emotional, very sad indeed but I like it …
Shuberth
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I thought this was good. Sad in a lot of ways. Great job, keep them coming... In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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thanks. haha this is really old. all of them are that i pinned to my authors page. my newer stuff is different though
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