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My goddess





I saw you standing in the sunset, silhouette against the gold.
My heart was lost and I had won, yet would you be my love to hold.
Explosions set my senses reeling, you were all I could desire.
I never dreamt I would be feeling like a phoenix in the fire.
Born again to worship beauty, acolyte of all you are,
Slave to every loving duty, captivated from afar.

Now all my dreams are fond illusion, you perform as loving wife,
I wake to find a sad confusion, not my dream of perfect life
One day I hope that I shall meet you, feel you fall in with me.
The Cupid's darts I know will greet you are the means to set you free.
Then you and I will reign the beaches, lovers who will never part.
Pure happiness within my reaches, when you fall inside my heart.





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  • Cannonsfire
    June 29, 2008

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    Whistles innocently thinking I wonder who this is he dreams of lol then I get hit in the head by a cricket ball whacked for a six over the fence and when I wake up I say 'DUH'!! I got it!!! lolol Love, C


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    I am sure you made poet2angels sigh more than once. Great entry Juls


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Romantic and beatifully penned ..
    Flawless, unforced rhyme...
    TY for the lovely entry!

    Lynda


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Im digging a hole in your heart and burying myself.
    Hopefully no other finds me in there.
    This was heartwarming

    and i am the one that it was penned for, feels it as well.

    Love
    Passions