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Leaving Footprints in the Sand

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Breeze against my bare skin
Freedom running in the wind
the sea wraps around my feet
Leaving footprints in the sand

Black image in the sunset
revealing silhouette of figure
Waves echoing in my ears
Leaving footprints in the sand

As a kite takes off into the sky
Wind lifts me up in it's hands
carefree I run into the darkness
Leaving footprints in the sands

Footprints disappear as tide ebbs
Wiping out my existence
no evidence I was there
No footprints left in the sand…

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image credit: http://katrinabc.deviantart.com/art/Miracles-Happen-I-52163878

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 7, 2008

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    Such beautiful imagery here, love how the picture goes along with the descriptions of a beach day, so close to the sand and the sea...


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 29, 2008
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    Lovely with a wonderful, harmonious flow..
    TY for entering

    Lynda