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I dream

Eyes fold to rest
Silks sway on supple skin
Under lavender painted skies
Butterflies sprinkle rainbows
Growing on the cotton clouds

Crimson breeze sings the melodies
Winds play the violin strings
Fairies peeking giggling silently from behind
And afar I hear familiar sounds
Distantly crystal clear, echoing all around

Softness plays in my hands
Eyes dried smile on sunrise
Crimson dews settle on rose petals
Sweet vanilla aroma fills the air
As clear oceanic blues & greens touch the skies

No boundary lines drawn
No soldiers standing on guard
Only love blooms on supple land
Showered with raindrops of solidarity
For my dad holds my hand – I dream

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Just a dream I live & breathe

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  • Luckintheshadows
    June 30, 2008

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    WOW! this gave me chills with it's soft, calming wonder. Your imagery is simply incredible, I felt like I could happily drown in this poem and never have a single regret!

    Thanks for sharing this, and for entering my contest,

    Luck.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 29, 2008

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    you know i think i am at a loss of words right now, but i will say this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    A BEAUTIFUL DREAM!!!!

    This sounds like a very beautiful and soothing dream, one which I know you will cherish forever.