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Prayering Violin

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Made to inspire poetry,

rather than to create it,

the violin is sounding in prayer.

Like distant chimes;

white swans are singing,

from the magic of pure poetry,

their ardency voices, startling and rare,

The enchantment makes the earth,

feel greatful-

and me for being here...

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  • Figaro
    September 13, 2008
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    I've always loved violin music - and love the imagery of prayer through the music itself.


  • edit my world.
    July 9, 2008

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    wow...the whole time reading this i can just picture a violin softly playing as i was reading this outloud. very beautiful, very heartfelt...good luck in your contest ^_^

    ♥Dani


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Very nice and so true

    Yes I have written poetry ot the embraces of my heart as I like to think of it and in the embrace for all to feel and know love as I have known it .


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    Humm..you are descrinbing HIS blessings from your poetry..I love this piece..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Very inspiring, romantic and to the point
    well done
    love
    Nick.

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