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key-whoring 101






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heart confused chatspeak with truth
"ILY-JK"









Author notes

The - obviously means a pause, to give accent to the final two letters,
especially if it's being read aloud. :]

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  • Tangled Angle
    July 24
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    10

    haha

    i think the use of abbreviations in this case is fine considering the subject.

  • Whispered Devotions
    July 4

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    Brilliant!!! as usual. I honestly have no critiques for this one. It is original and quite powerful for a Haiku.


    Amy

  • Naridill gold member
    June 29

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    I honestly don't like the use of abbreviation's. I feel it takes away from that nature of poetry - especially forms.

  • LiesOfDevotion
    June 29

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    Hmph.

    Ok, so I give up on the critiquing, considering I've sat here for five minutes staring at the screen.


  • Mad As Rabbits
    June 28
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    I like this a lot. Actually, I love it haha Nothing negative to say. Not only does this capture a lot of emotion, but it is very relatable to teens especially since so much is done on AIM these days.

    Boy am I glad you're on my team

    Love Always,

    Caroline

  • the sepia vitamin
    June 28

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    I love you. hahaha, well, that was supposed to be "I love it", but I guess my fingers love you more than it. but that's alright. and no jk from me.
    but yes, this is brilliant.

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