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Dreams Can Come Alive

Once upon a full moon night
I dreamed a dream of a beautiful sight;
she was a woman, slim and tall,
out of her eyes pure power shone.

A room with her was filled by light,
all eyes to her were drawn as if by witches might.
As at the club she swayed and danced
she held all the men in the room entranced.

Few years after I awoke from the same dream,
Went of to work, not a sight unseen,
but that night as I headed to the dance,
what that dream foretold, finally made sense.

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  • islekine gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Dreams are wonderful mysterious

    adventures!! Well penned!
    Write on and on.


  • Luckintheshadows
    June 30, 2008

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    I'm a firm believer in dreams coming true. I love your poem, it's powerful, with vivid imagery.

    Thanks for sharing this, and for entering my contest,

    Luck.


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Dream ar magic...I agree...A great poem...dreaming a dream to find it come true makes you beleive in them!

    return the favor?