Your nature haiku
blew more like Paris Hilton
than F5 twisters.
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This one's for you. You know who you are. :]
Please tell me what you think
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haha clever -
lol well I hope I am not the guilty party in this. WOW, now tell us how you really feel now.

Amy -
Not sure this has anything past being a punch line - it has a comedic sense within it, whether funny or not. I like the way you slyly emerged a simile in there to give it a kick start to engine.
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Hmm.
Don't think this is me.
It was short and really funny. Not much substance to critique here.
Well, not any. I've got to find something, else your ego'll go through the roof.
Next one, I swear.

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I agree on the bit how there's not much to critique...haha
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HAHA!
Perfect
Love Always,
Caroline

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hahahahaha. this one's soooooooooooooo hilarious. ♥


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*is possibly the guilty party*?
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