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Awakening Senses

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Slivers of sunrise

kiss the silver bark
with molten gold

Leaves tremble -
like paper confetti
tossed high on the morning breeze

The warmth unfurls petals
of purest peach...
I inhale their musky presence
to wake the senses...

...starting my day...

      with a sigh

 

 

 


 

Author notes

Three prompts...
Peach roses
Birch Trees
Sunrises.

All three used.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • islekine
    July 7

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    Beautifuly penned!

    Best wishes in the contest! Great job on using all three...
    Write on!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 3

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    Absolutely beautiful. You have incorporated all three of my favorite things into the beautiful gem. Your first stanza paints a breathtaking picture. I loved this. Thank you so much for your entry. ~Pamela


  • pania gold member
    June 29

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    A lyrical sunrise; I love the awakening of the senses in time and tune with the awakening of a new day. The images given are very sensual - kiss, tremble, unfurl, musky, sigh...


  • arafura
    June 29
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    A lovely mind picture you've planted in my mind! Good luck in the contest!

  • Bad Bill
    June 29
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    Lyrical and lovely, Sue. The imagery is superb--this is a definite pleasure to read.

    Bill


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 28

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    A wonderful moment of awakening - the sun gilding bark, a confetti of leaves, petals unfolding in warmth, you sighing in start of your day.
    Marene
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