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Promise

 

 

 

 

 

I gave you a vow  solemm promise

my word  swearing do what you asked;

promised  long as I lived,  never leave you

 

Gave that  affidavit, my word  with love

written not  on paper,   stylus of my heart

God knows promise,  sealed with  kisses

 

My word  all I have, given freely with love

trusting and loving you more  than most men

easily I gave, you needed that, I loved you.

 

Deeply into your eyes, promise was agreed

communicated with affectionate feelings;

heart and soul sealed, carressed with love

 

heart no longer empty, filled with your  love

love caught the emptiness, fused with passion

aches, sadness-gone, my word, bond remains.

 

Certificate with writings etched inside our hearts

lasting long as I live, determined  keep this vow

keep my promise to you, I  love you.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Never forget,I gave my word to you!

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  • I love you poet. HUrry back

    Passions


  • Katilina
    May 3

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    Awesome

    True love is forever and is larger than all the matter in the universe. What an honest love to be found in this poem.


  • poetrandy
    April 18
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    Great poem!

    Excellent work, my new friend! Great poem, with meanings on several different levels. I like it!

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    March 25

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    A passionate piece of poetry, the depth of emotion is strongly felt by the reader. NB solemm/solemn. " My word, all I have" compounds the honour attached to giving/gifting your word and that your word is your bond. Especially liked " stylus of my heart"


  • edens-envy
    March 25

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    There is a lot feeling in this piece. Word choice plays a god role in this, there is so much emotion attached.
    "Certificate with writings etched inside our hearts
    lasting long as I live, determined keep this vow"
    Beautiful write!


  • HeartBr8ker
    March 25

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    I love this whole piece!!!!!!
    It is a great write.
    Great flow
    Great imagery
    GREAT GREAT GREAT
    My fovorit part is...



    heart no longer empty, filled with your love

    love caught the emptiness, fused with passion

    aches, sadness-gone, my word, bond remains.



    Certificate with writings etched inside our hearts

    lasting long as I live, determined keep this vow

    keep my promise to you, I love you.....


    Once again.... GREAT WRITE lol keep them coming


  • estbelle gold member
    March 19

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    My word all I have, given freely with love
    trusting and loving you more than most men
    easily I gave, you needed that, I loved you.

    just beautiful. I hope she doesn't forget
    belle

  • a lovely write...


  • ScarletO gold member
    March 12
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    what happened to all the comments that were posted to this beautiful poem.


  • Flowergirl
    February 21

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    wow very nice i wrote a poem similure to this one it hase the same title but i am sure i probely wrote it for a dif. reason nice work and keep it up.


  • liltulip gold member
    February 20
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    beautiful!

    love it!

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