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Star Ship

                                              Star Ship           June 2008

                                      It’s a long, long road
                                      To God knows where
                                      Celestial wind
                                      Blows through your hair

                                      As I watch you;
                                      Wraith like, disappear
                                      Into the fading light

                                      I knew someday
                                      You’d go away
                                      Knew that your soul was grieving

                                      Watched the stars
                                      Through prison bars
                                      For your time of leaving

                                      Kiss me now
                                      And kiss me deep
                                      Before you’re out of sight…

                                                    ***

                                      Cos there’s a ship out on
                                      The Milky Way
                                      Tonight


                                                 
                                     

                                     













Copyright John Scott 2008
                                                 

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    November 12

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    the sorrows and pain of one leaving.. you never get through it.. for always on the mind and heart the remembrance of pain from behind the prison bars in my heart.. stunning always John for you have a way of expressing your heart through your beautiful pen.. hugs always Hun Angel♥


  • Jesann gold member
    June 10

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    Brilliant.
    Wonderful wording ..I enjoyed the whole poem...and esp love your opening verse.
    Great title too.


    • humblpye gold member
      June 11
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      Thanks Anne, I appreciate your comments so much!
      John

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