Daylight is bright outside this room.
She won't see the sun today.
Can't smell the fresh airs sweet perfume.
Utterly stuck and locked away.
His robe still hangs on the door.
He's not coming back to get it, for he exist no more.
Yet, She waits there today like everyday before.
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt Semi Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 29, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A sad and depressing piece that I can relate to!! A fascinating and unique take on the prompt.. enjoyed it very much!
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Wow this was really deep and sounded depressing.
I enjoyed reading and trying to figure out what
it was about.
good write
keep writing.
+!~Confused CRow~!+
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I could feel the pain in this! It can be taken many ways, which gives it a greater impact. Is it a lost love or a memory that haunts her thoughts. Well done and good luck!
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