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Father's hands; like termites

rotted childhood woods
but I bloomed again. you can
cut branches... not roots.

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written for teen idol 9 round 4

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  • Tangled Angle
    July 24, 2008
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    i thought this was very profound & hits home for me.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 29, 2008

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    you know that is the truth, i like this poem here, keep it flowing my friend and good luck in the contest