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Dream On!

Duke Theseus did celebrate,
His love to Hippolyta; late,
But on Midsummer's Night
It turned out to be light,
So some other young bloods thought it great -

To get themselves off to the wood,
And it wasn't for practices lewd,
For Puck's interventions
Spoiled carnal intentions,
With the aid of a flower, he pursued -

Each amorous, glamorous pair,
Sometimes seen, often not even there,
And he fired Cupid's darts
To pierce their true hearts,
And ensure every one got a share -

Of a dream filled with passion and love:
Oh, and Bottom, when push came to shove,
As an ass, not a flower
Entered Titania's bower
And slept, as the dawn broke above.

I can't tell you very much more,
We might set it to Mendelssohn's score,
But hey, that's been done
This was only in fun: and Shakespeare?
He'll open the door -

To words full of myst'ry and wonder
The tragic, the clown's comic blunder,
So read what he's written
I think you'll be smitten
For his verse has the power of thunder -

To shake this small speck which we tread on,
This planet we make our soft bed on:
I may seek to amuse,
But it's Bill you should choose
For the pure light of truth to be shed on.

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  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    what an enjoyabe romp...

    ...with a hey-nonny-no. A great poem on Bill Shakespeare's work. I have heard Mendelssohn's music...and it is like your poem; a joyful flit through the forest as the characters of the play would have loved.

    I enjoy the rhyme pattern, even if it is a little jumbled in the fifth verse, it still reads well when read aloud.

    I find your poem enchanting, musical and enjoyable. Well done.


  • Lyndon gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Knowledge of the Warwickshire romp

    on a midsummer eve rings true. I know it was in Greece but who cares; our Bill was British!
    Thank you, poet, for your rhyme, told in good time.
    Thank you for your wit which my sides do split.
    And my poetic son ... I note you can spell Mendelssohn!


  • ea silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    This is so spritely; you always seeem to be prancing through the heather with these sweeping tongue in cheek
    commentaries - quite enjoyable.