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"I'll join you in the afterlife, this I pray!"

I sit and wonder how I have gone on
since you left this life going to the great beyond
my existence though grueling
I've made seem happy for the children's sake
putting on a smiling face
their contentment trying to make
I dream of the day when I will again see you
with GOD on my side, I'll make it through
each day grows longer than the one before
time never changes how much you, I adore
although, you have been gone more that three decades
I have never regretted the marriage vows we made
so young, teenagers at the time we were web
happiness and true love, I remember
before you were gone
since that dark day only emptiness I've know instead
I hold tight to our three children
of them you'd be so proud
they never forgot you
this I did not allow!
my love for you grows stronger each day
I'll join you in the afterlife one day, this to GOD, I pray!!!

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6/28/08 Pic prompt contest: pic chosen listed below:

http://iardacil.deviantart.com/art/Faith-of-the-Heart-78903691

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  • Shayla Walker
    July 8, 2008
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    I hope I find love that is still intact even after death!!!Bless you!!!


  • dream.love.live.
    July 5, 2008
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    you will see him again


  • Babycakes
    July 3, 2008

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    True love. It's like a magnet, will attract and pull you together. I lost the father of my son and can identify. Love never dies.


  • Wolfdog silver member
    July 3, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, just as it is. It reminds me of a poem I wrote a couple of years or so ago, it is called:
    "Bridges". Here's a link for you:

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2140524


  • chapin
    July 2, 2008
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    wow this is an awesome poem. good job


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 1, 2008

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    this is really nice,
    i love how you took the prompt its very sad yet happy and full of hope i do like this, one suggestion i don't know if you meant to write allow instead of allowed, on line 20 i think it would sound better, best of luck in the contest,
    love kitty xxx

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