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Purgatory

Lost, forever lost
In a blank world
I'm trapped in purgatory

Forever alone

I'm here

Always will be

In a blank world

Filled with nothing

Help me

I am lost, forever lost

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i thought it was a cool idea. but thats up to you to decide.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    HUmm..you are with a thought provoking idea..I must say...I love this piece..and thanks for sharing such an intriguing piece..