Hello, I am the Doctor,
I am alone,
my destiny.
Companions do not stay,
fear saps strength,
they weaken.
This time on my hands,
my solo burden,
my Shackles.
At night I always dream,
resting in peace,
upon Galifrey.
Author notes
I was wondering how he might feel, and how much time he actually has companionship. Not a lot in the grand scheme of things I think
This was a quick write, so if it smells , apologies.
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- Doctor who!!!!!!! by MrCrepsley.
330 points, ended June 30, 2008, 6 entries
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Well, this is very abstract - and that I LIKE! Love the background, though it is a bit hard to read and focus on the words.. it's still pretty groovy
It sort of reminds me of 'Bill and Tedds bogus journey' lol! Anyhow - Great write from and amazing imagination!
"At night I always dream,
resting in peace,
upon Galifrey."
Always, Amber
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I love the background... Planets, space... the TARDIS. I've never read a poem about the doctor, but this piece is sad and you can really feel the Doctor's loneliness when he doesn't have a companion with him.
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WOW!!!! Nice work.
Love the background. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOOD LUCK
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I sense deeper meanings than the surface words. Wishing you luck in the contest.
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I don't think that it is a bad write I like that show you did a good job much love always and goodluck in the contest
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