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Warm Grass

On a summer, a late morning

the cute little kitten lays

on the warm short grass

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    July 4, 2008
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    Nice one


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    This is a wonderful image where you use more than one sense--touch for softness of the kitten; the scent of warm grass; and of course sight for vivid images throughout! Great poem and of course you know I am partial to kittens/cats.

  • carole21
    July 1, 2008

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    cute

    cute and inviting write . . like "the cute little kitten lays" and "on the warm short grass" . . well done


  • goddesskevauna
    June 30, 2008
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    Very cute! But kitty looks unhappy! Looks like he might wanna pounce on someone!


  • Katie Lazette
    June 29, 2008
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    Cute pic, cute kitten, cute poem. Keep up the good work.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    wow beautiful the kitten laying sunbathing in the warmth of the universes beauty just chilling watching the world go by which is great for us all to do sit and relax and do nothing wonderful me wants that kitten to snuggleup to lol

    • Candy6
      June 28, 2008
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      Thanks maralisa. Did you like the picture?

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