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Raw Gem ( Hm )

Uncut......

Raw passion ignites,

Flaming Rose,

in Ruby silks,

Lingerie of lace,

Teasing fullness of curves,

Teamed rim of desire.

 

 

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A contest entry

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  • Riftkin gold member
    June 29
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    Great use of 20 words best of luck in my contest. Riftkin


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      June 30
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      Many thanks for hosting and allowing me to pen this for you
      and, for the HM x

  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    June 28

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    smoking...............! hehe..... what a great write.... like always..... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest.....!

  • Swtpoetryman
    June 28

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN!

    Fits the picture of a lovely lady to a T! GOOD LUCK in the contest, Julie - and I hope that we both win a trophy! HE! HE! I couldn't help meself as i have been on quite a roll on this sunny Saturday!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 28

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    Bravo bravo!! you did a wonderful job!!! I really loved the sensuality in this poem!! The softness of this write was really beautiful.. You did wonderfully!! I wish you the best of luck!

    Angel

  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 28

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    Oh my goodness

    This is a great piece with a bit of a tease written within you go girl
    I am out of aplauds so will try to make up later

  • Ithica silver member
    June 28
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    Hot! Hot! Hot! Very sexy visuals... lets the imagination wander...


  • penman gold member
    June 28
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    Excellent

    Very powerful take on the prompt. So well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 28

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    wow julie wonderful hun full of sensual passions with sweet flavors of pure love all the way through I loved every word its so beautifully created
    Raw passion ignites, Flaming Rose,in Ruby silks,
    Lingerie of lace,Teasing fullness of curves,Teamed rim of desire.good luck in the contest my friend


  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    June 28

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    A beautiful tease of passions sparkle, uncut and raw. So few of words to pen such intense desire. Wonderfully displayed. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp


  • Beret55 silver member
    June 28
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    mmmmmmmmmmmmmm sounds good to me.

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