Love come to the garden,
taste of my wine.
Beneath the sycamore,
make love divine.
Hands soft and so tender,
kisses so sweet.
Bring thirst for my nectar,
make love complete.
Let our love overpower,
no longer forsake.
Bring out these desires,
here for you to take.
Such splendor and beauty,
you no longer resist,
Succumb to your feelings,
once you are kissed.
Let my fragrance delite,
sweep you away.
Love come to the garden,
this summer day.
In a list
A contest entry
- Romance your Lover (over 18) by MoonsShadow.
1500 points, ended July 6, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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SO SWEET AND TENDER!!!!
It is words like these I long to hear from a lady one day!
If I do not my dream of it will keep my heart young and alive. 
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Thank you Kevin
Good morning my friend. Your comment is very nice and I am glad you enjoyed. Someday you will meet that ladylove and she will bew so lucky tyo have you. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Ah, love in a summer's garden, it couldn't be better. You are an inspiration, Sandy, thank you for sharing your heart with all of us.
You even found a pic of a lovely young lady that looks somewhat like you. Wonderfully done.
Brazos
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What A Nice Comment
Good Morning Brazos, Thank you for stopping by. Your comment was a delight to read and brought a smile. Always nice to hear from you. You have a wonderful day and may the sun shine upon you always.
You take care.
Always,
Sandy
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~sigh~
You have again taken my breath away with the lovingly sweet poem
Absolutely adoring
Best of luck hun
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Lovely Comment
Dear Amanda, Your comment was so nice. I am glad you enjoyed reading. Was missing someone as I wrote it. Hope you have a wonderful day dear friend. Many hugs and Smiles.
Love,
Sandy
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Pretty
Very pretty words, Sandy. Sensual, romantic, just plain good.
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Good Morning
Hello Jaime, So nice to read your lovely comment. Thank you for alwatys reading. I do appreciate it. And it is always so nice to hear from you my friend. You have a wonderful day.
Bless You,
Sandy
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How happy to take comfort in each others passion and let love share the beauty and emotion. Moments given from each other lost in feelings as the fragrance of sweet delight. Good luck in the contest.
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Lovely Comment
Good Morning Dan, Your comment was quite lovely my friend. Nice to hear from you. You do start my day out with a smile. You take care and enjoy this beautiful Sunday God has blessed us with.
Always,
Sandy
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I love the garden so this drew me in as I read it. Beautiful words of love spoken here, in the fragrance of a lovely garden...beautiful, thanks for sharing
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Lovely Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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I really liked this. It's so simple and delightful - made me smile. And the rhyming and meter is so unforced and natural too, it makes the poem easy to read and understand. the last two lines perfectly add up the emotions described in the whole poem. Perfect! Good luck in the contest!!!
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Great Comment
Your comment was very nice and most appreciated. Thank you for stopping by. You take care. Sandy
Bless You,
Sandy
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Very pretty. Shancy.
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading Shancy.
Take Care,
Sandy
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Excellent
Such splendor and beauty,
you no longer resist,
Succumb to your feelings,
once you are kissed.
Let my fragrance delite,
sweep you away.
Lost here in the garden,
this summer day.
This is totally beautiful
Love the soft rhyme
Rick
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Thank You Rick
Good Morning. That is wonderful she is out of the hospital. She has a wonderful friend in you. I will keep her in my prayers. Thank you for the nice comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Delightful!
Excellent rhyme and meter! Just the type of poetry that flows so eloquently from the screen to my mind, so that it's a part of me instantly. No unnecessary words, just right!
Good luck in the contest,
Best wishes,
Jennifer
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Thank You Jennifer
Good Morning, I hope you have a wonderful day. Nice to hear from you. Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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very beautiful poem you have written here, great job and good luck with the contest.. i love poems like this, reminds me of neruda, he is a favorite of mine..i' sure you would enjoy him as well just from seeing the way that you write.
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Lovely Comment
Hello, Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate the nice comment. You take care.
Bless You,
sandy
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a very loving poem
I see the love flowing in this, compassion just flows so smoothly, thank you for this entry, good luck...Linda
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