Enslaved against her will
Bound no longer free
Tentacles enwrap
Burrowing so deep
Slowly draining her blood
In time with her heartbeat
Excruiating torture
The taste of pain so sweet
As eagerly it feasts
Unable to resist
Captive and capture
Bound in this cruel tryst
Author notes
Credit Artist:
http://darkartists-inc.deviantart.com/art/Resurrection-Part-Four-88204530
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt Semi Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 29, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended September 13, 443 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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How do you do it?? seriously I need to take some poetry lessons from you mister!! lol
Amazing!! (as per usual)
Angie
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Thanks young lady!
I was on a roll there for awhile.
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this so gold hon i like this its so creepy good it is always such a thrill reading your work this was great goose bumps
jewels
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Great Imagery
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. A great take on the picture prompt. Nice gory imagery.
You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Thanks sandy. The pic was so cool I had to write one for it.
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Mmm sadistic theme to this great dark write I must say, great interpretation of the pic. I enjoyed reading every line and the title really captured my eyes. Good work, bravo! Congrats on the trophie
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Thanks for the visit and read! I really appreciate it. I'm fairly new to the dark genre. Having only written a few, but must say they are interesting!
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Loved how you went with the pic. and showed your dark side!!
"Excruiating torture
The taste of pain so sweet"
Seems like there's alittle bit of a kinky side in these words!
"Captive and capture
Bound in this cruel tryst"
Lovers of pain!!! Oh my...I think you're being alittle naughty! lol
Great poem and congrats on the honorable!!!
darlintlc
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Holy super creepy picture prompt!
Fantastic take on it....certainly showing your dark side in this one! Great job, and congrats on the HM.
Jamie
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Gee fader , what a superb piece for the image provided.
I bet you think i cant relate but i can..i've a few pair of shoes that make me feel the exact same way...torture
galfalfa
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Hey gal! Its great to hear from you! Hope all is well!
Yes I know you ladies and your shoes!
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eek.. very dark and very fitting for the pic!! A creepy write indeed!! Excellent take!
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Thanks for the comment and HM kiwi! It was a very cool picture! So unusual!
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wow
makes the skin crawl and the hair on the back of the neck raise...as eagerly it does feed bound in this cruel tryst..awesome my friend jester winner wrote all over it
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WOW
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wow what a take on this.... i wrote for this one too and i like yours better... great write.... thanks for sharing and gooodluck in contest...!
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How we always end up like this... Great write! So true on so many different levels. Good luck in the contest!!
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I absolutely am in love with this! The pain comes out so clear and just sends a chill down my spine, great job!
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