I'm a nobody here,
But soon
Artists and rockstars
Will try to pack my words
Into syringes.
Author notes
I read the links.
1. Humble? by Bob 42
2. Trend Setter by Soul
3. Bliss by mama-drama
A contest entry
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300 points, ended July 21, 2008, 27 entries
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Such a unique approach, and I love it...
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oh, this is such a cool write!
I like your style, Poet. Love, Lane
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Cool man, I like it
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This is well done, poet. Love the confidence. Good luck with silver or bronze. I'm sorry I entered. Maybe you had a chance. Write on. LOL
Dez
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i really like it although its short i love the imagry it provides.
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Good way of putting it out...no fuzz though.
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Im not fuzzy down there. =[
but, I do very much enjoy this.
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aWWW THATS CUTE.
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WOW!!!
Well when they jam your words in those syringes..
hope they don't jam 'em into themselves.. haha..
Nice work my friend..
_Mandi
P.S.
I want a little love note along side of this, haha j\k.
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Neat! I like that its short, sweet, and to the point. I read it once, and then had to read it again. A very well written attention grabber!
When I read your poem, the meaning i feel that its stating is about the obsessions of artists and rockstars with fame and fortune. All secret cut throats who are addicted with the celebrity life. And your words which they would use are like their addictions. I dont know if I'm even any where near the correct meaning, but I gave it a shot. Thanks for the read!
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Wow! BAM! Like emeril says, lol....great job!!!
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wow- SLAM!
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Most impressive
Yes, it sounds to me like you are a bit of a rock star yourself! I liked all of it, as it made you sit up and take notice of what you were saying. Well done.
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Hey...
I'm still waiting for those cute little love notes and the make out session lol... -
You Got My Attention
I loved your opening shameless line lol. This piece is definitely interesting. I like it. Artists and rockstars will try to pack my words inot syringes. Love it. ~mandie~ p.s. when do we make out? lol
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