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Oh God,


I can see myself in your world,
but this I can see only very faintly.

My eyes are blinded by my selfishness
and only you can illuminate my being.

Let me explore the greatness
that only you see in me.

Clear the shrouded scales
from my every perception
and cloak me in your loving kindness -
your guiding intellect.

I am a speck,
you are the Light.

In you I am basking…


oh God.






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  • Cup-a-Joe
    June 30, 2008
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    Paul,
    This was created~wonderful.
    Joe


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 30, 2008
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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    Yes..You are so true while describing HIS glory my friend..I love this piece..and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..


    • paulcreates silver member
      June 29, 2008
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      Thank you PrabhuDayal and God bless you. I've always wanted to try writing in a style similar to yours.

      Paul


  • Jalalbad gold member
    June 28, 2008
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    Your awe for God is clear, I loved this piece precious poet

  • Amarige
    June 28, 2008
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    Ohhh I love this piece Paul..so much truth and spirituality..God bless you my friend!
    Ruby

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