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Muted Ecstasy (HM)

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BAM! flames engulfed my car; licking skin so soft. UNBEARABLE PAIN

morphine management! OOOOOOOOOOO  SO SWEET!

 

glitters in the gloaming, 

lea of cotton-ball flowers, source of white relief

dabbled on a canvas of serene surreality; 

gown of gossamer gyrates, {dance of the dead?}

 

waves of lucidity wash away all fear 

morphine mirage in muted ecstasy, 

cooling fangs of furious fire. 

 

Drip, pause, Drip, pause, Drip, pause

drops of deliverance; miracle for months of pain placation! 

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 3

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    excellent~

    Wow
    I love the imagery you have used in this poem sis...
    Since I am on Morphine for pain..I liked the line
    Waves of lucidity washed away all fear
    And indeed Morphine does wash away all fears...
    Congrats on the Honorable Mention
    So truly well deserved
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • MysticalRayne gold member
    July 2

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    I loved this, the presentation is fabulous and your words paint a wonderful picture congrats on your HM Lots of luv dear sis


  • thepoetssoul gold member
    July 1
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    Oh my I really love the way you deliver this masterpiece.Absolutely stunning in it's intiretyYour images are very vivid and deep, and grasp taking me to the edge of your creativeness.Beautifully done on your poem.I truly enjoyed this write thanks for sharing your talent. BRAVO!!!

    Tony

  • SoulWhispher
    June 29

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    great poem

    Contgradulations on the honorable winner, this is a powerfull poem that really speaks to the reader, great job, Love John


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 29

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    Powerful write
    Self expressive as it is deep
    The pain and sufferance felt through out this amazing and heartfelt poem
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie

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