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A dream of you

On every perfect summer's day, I dream of you.
When you are stuck so far away, I dream of you.

Within my mind you are with me, in all I do.
I never want to set you free, just dream of you.

Before I sleep I lie in bed, and bid adieu.
Then through the night inside my head, a dream of you.

The times that we can be as one are all too few,
In poetry this tale is spun a dream of you.

When we can meet we will rejoice, and live anew;
Until such time I'll have to voice this dream of you.

To live apart must be a curse, that's born by two
And cricketjeff will make his verse, a dream of you.

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regular hexameter monorhymed Ghazal with internal rhyme in each couplet.

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  • Ruby34
    July 11

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    Nice Ghazal..I loved how you included your name in the last line..thank you for joining my contest and best of luck
    Ruby

  • Dream away
    I shall meet you there.

    Precious piece.
    another hexa something or another lol.

    only you honey only you

    Love ya

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