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DayDREAMS

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If I woke up a million times,

it gives me great pleasure

in living that moment

all over again

with you.

If I could share my last breathe

I would give to you

my all.

Every raindrop that falls from the sky

tenderly against the world's face

is another day of enchantment

full of true love and grace.

When I woke up today,

with you lying next to me

with my hands feeling your heartbeat

is, and always will be

 a Priceless moment

for me. 

 

 

 

 

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  • The Voice of Victory
    July 1
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    Sounds like Love to me.

    Great Write,
    Smooth & Beautiful.


  • onesugar silver member
    June 29

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    Beautifully touching romantic and sentimental
    the feeling of warmth and love flows from the page
    taking your reader on the most amazing journey.
    A pleasure sis
    ~sugarcookie~


    • Ephiphany gold member
      June 29
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      Thanks cookie

      You know I get a lil mushy at times I appreciate you stopping by.

      -

  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 28

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    i loved loved this a whole hon i enjoyed this a whole lot very well emotional very great expressed good luck in the contest

  • Arzab
    June 28

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    Beautiful write, Sis. Lots of emotion expressed. I didn't have a favorite part. I liked the whole poem. It made me think of how precious it can be to have love in life. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    June 28
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    go girl this is penned just right.


    • Ephiphany gold member
      June 28
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      Thanks sis

      I enjoyed writing this. I get a lil mushy sometimes

      -BossLady

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    June 28

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    beautiful like you sissy pooh

    Tasha


  • darell
    June 28

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    Enchanting

    A breathTaking proclaimation of loves
    purest devotion. How sentimental you are.
    I could feel your sincerest emotions
    flutter like butterflies in spring.
    A beautiful write cloven in loving rapture!


    • Ephiphany gold member
      June 28
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      Thank you sweetheart.

      Your words are enchanting as well.
      Sentiments from my heart, always.

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