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Why

Let me breathe,
leave me alone,
why can't I have some space?

You pester me,
you surround me,
please go away!

I can't stand you,
I hate your guts,
get out of my life.

Why are you here,
I'm going insane!
Stop entering my mind!

Why in the world
did somebody have to
ask WHY?

It's been on my mind lately...

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  • haha

    considering you've said about 50 times that it's ---->NOT<------ about a person, i'm guessing it's ---> NOT <---- about a person. lol.

    it's a really great write, if you think about it, it's very true...i love the last thing "why in the world did somebody have to ask WHY?" ahhhhh i love it. clever.

    wonderful job, whit!

    ~Bethh

  • Awesome

    Awesome Whit! Although it sounds like a particular someone ur talking about but other than that i think it was very well written


  • Aquarius
    June 29

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    haha :]

    Very nicely said :]
    Yeah, I know how you feel though. Not with the same person, but I know what its like.
    Poor you :[

  • NyteShade
    June 29

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    It's difficult forgetting some ppl, they don't leave your mind completely, there more like shadows then anything else.

    Nicely done Whit


    • FieryHollow
      June 29
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      Thanks for reading Bell, although this wasn't about a person, tehe.

  • Fortunepiper
    June 28
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    i had to edit my comment because the walls have ears...
    lol. i loved it, Nay.
    What is it about?

  • Dmonik
    June 28

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    Nicely done Whit.
    Why? The question without a solid answer....
    Excellent writing, and thought provoking. Keep it up.

    'D'

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