Pale, tempting beauty,
with pouting, poisonous lips,
hides fatal intention
beneath her alluring kiss.
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 15 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended June 28, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Title suggestions?
Comments
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Oh no!!!!! This bit me! Very good!
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Very nice personification, and tidily put in the limited word count. Lovely descriptions, enjoyable (and not overdone!) alliteration. The blooms are certainly pretty. Well done, gardener!
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Lovely flow and metaphor...very creative and well written...thank you for sharing!
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Thank you, Mysticstorm!
I am so honored to receive Silver in your contest. Thank you for the inspiring prompt.
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