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Hidden Secrets

Missing image

 

 

 

 

 

pure and white
pristine innocence
enticing you to touch
taste the danger
that is me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes



Prompt: Oleander

15 words or less



A contest entry

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 14, 2008

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    ohh taste the danger that is me


    wicked, i love that hehehe

    Many congrat's on the bronze, a great write mum



    Cind


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    Wow, I absolutely love this and the picture as well, spectacular!


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Lovely...what we see is often not what we get...love where you took this, very creative with a great ending...thank you for sharing!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 28, 2008

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    Stunning writing here Margaret. Wonderful. Very creative too. I agree, what is on the surface is not what it all seems. Good luck in the contest.

    Wayne Leon
    xx


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    JUST WONDERFUL!!!

    Yes, what is on the surface is not at all like what is hiding underneath.

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