Breath with me
I take in the freshness
of mountain mornings
laced with the scent
of tall pine and fur.
Once in a while
mountain lilies
mix in
with ripe huckleberries.
When you breathe with me
close your eyes
for new dreams
will spark
from mountain meadows.
You will feel things
you have never
felt before.
In a list
A contest entry
- pen beautifuly by poetic-enigma21.
700 points, ended July 12, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very beautiful , loved the imagery in the first and second para.
liked the feel it gives , and how it passes from the writer to the reader.
beautiful write
thanks for sharing
best of luck
cheers
shilpa
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Beautiful
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Lovely visuals here.
C
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that was a good poem while put together
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