you've asked me
you've begged me
but i cant do it
please don't expected
that of me
you've hurt me
you've yelled at me
but i still refuse
doesn't that tell you
just what i feel
i'll be there
when you need me
i'll come through
just for you
i'll hold you up
be your stone
but i wont help you give up
i'll be that friend
if you call
the one that runs
to your aid
i'll protect you
and help you
and always stand there by your side
A contest entry
- Prompt around 20 lines by mysticstorm.
1000 points, ended July 9, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice feeling of truth in support and friendship...we all need someone which we often forget...nicely written...thank you for sharing!
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only od thing I see is second to last stanza should that not be "protect"? either way a really nice write.
Best of luck to you. -
nice nice!
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good work
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