Fragrant vows,
so moving,
yet
each disrespectful vowel
burns heart
with oleander valor
asphyxiating love.
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prompt-oleander
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 15 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended June 28, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely! Very well done is word choice and brevity...beautiful imagery...thank you for sharing!
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welcome!
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Beautifully done, my best wishes always.
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Thank you
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