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Word painter

As the scribes angle of
vision swirl blissfully
around until it reaches
paradise.
To create patterns that
roll forward into a
unique harmony washing
the readers soul with
love and beauty beyond.
Which none can compare
the uniqueness of each
pattern made?

Author notes

"hypergraphia" and "banana"
I was invited to this contest by my freind pattyann4500 thank for your invite
maralisa and pattyanne4500

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  • Lyndon gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    You have given, through imagery, a picture of art in motion, almost. Watch auxiliary clauses working as a sentence in free verse. The rinsing metaphor "washing the reader's soul" gave rise to mirth into my head as I worked at your metaphysical effort! Perhaps it's unwise to use the abstraction "unique" twice.
    Thank you so much for entering.
    Lyndon of the Winklings.

  • WanderingOdyssey
    July 29, 2008

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    A very eloquent portrayal of poetry as an art, I truly enjoyed it!

    "unique harmony washing
    the readers soul with"

    I REALLY liked those lines, beautiful imagery!
    Thanks for entering the contest and complying with my weird rule of including "banana!"
    -Odyssey


  • penman gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful. Such a great creation. Best of luck in the contest.


  • peridotPixi
    July 2, 2008

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    i really love word painter, i love how you speak of painting and expressing it with some beautiful words, the background pull it together niceley also, keep up the wonderful writing, and good luck in the contest, ~Amy


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Wow hun
    You have painted your words in this one
    Beautifully written
    Softly does it flow
    Good luck to you in the contest
    Julie


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 28, 2008

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    I thought that this was beautiful. Wonderful writing here. Such creativity as well as a stunning background. Keep writing. You have such talent.

    With
    Dark
    Love
    And Wishes
    Wayne Leon


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 28, 2008

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    maralisa this is butiful
    good luck in contest
    xx cheeky xx


  • sOuL
    June 28, 2008

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    Wow amazing, what a beautiful poem it is. I think i have read the best poem of the day is this one..take care my friend Smile


  • Angelflower
    June 28, 2008

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    This was beautiful!!! I really loved the image and emotion that you placed in your words.. you did a wonderful job.. I wish you the best of luck..

    Angel

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