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I Am [Interlude III]



and there's pain in the perfect pieces

I can't breathe -
I'm suffocating under the pretence of life




I hope you fucking choke on the lies you poured down my throat,
with that grin fixed to your face even in death

so the world would know

what you were

what you are


what you turned me into.





fuck you.


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Don't bother.
I just needed to vent.

In a list

Honesty would be lovely

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  • Naridill
    July 9
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    Vent. Gah. Always an ugly sight.

  • I know how you feel, sweetie... I've been there, and that's why it's great to be a poet... Getting all those feelings out on paper is rather cathartic, if you ask me! Beautiful writing, my dearest, and I miss you!


  • Tattboyspet silver member
    June 30

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    we ALL suffocate at least once a month! lol!

    just needed to vent huh?
    oooooooooooooo - can I relate!!!!!
    well, I still love you!!!

  • i wish i could have said it so well myself. your venting is a great piece of writing and expression. thank you for sharing this with me tonight and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

    ps-- i hope that you soon find peace.


  • hamid
    June 28

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    ohhh amazing what kind of thoughts or expression

    I hope you fucking choke on the lies you poured down my throat,
    with that grin fixed to your face even in death

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