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All Along




your face was the sky
your hands were the wind
and I,
I was your heartbeat
didn't you know that's why you loved me?






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  • eltortedequeso
    June 28, 2008
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    very cute


    • PsydewaysTears gold member
      June 28, 2008
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      very sad

      it makes me sad cause i feel like it's about one person who means everything to someone... versus that someone meaning only one thing to the first. and then i wonder about what it's asking and think 'what if the question is real?'... 'what if the statements are true?'... and 'why is it written in past tense?'

      • eltortedequeso
        June 28, 2008
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        yes, I got all that. And its very applicable, I feel, to a very recent situation.

        I read it as the way it was written, as the speaker speaking to me. And I, being the way I am, placed myself as one role, and you as the other. Which was kind of cute, but yes, sad


  • Angelflower
    June 28, 2008

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    This was short and simple, but you expressed so much emotion in your words.. I really loved this.. You did a wonderful job in showing love...


    Angel


  • hamid
    June 28, 2008
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    Short but heart touching, i like it,

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