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Terra cotta (Senyru)

 

 

 

 

 

terra cotta

shining, forming, shaping

artistic hands

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 4, 2008
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    Oh this is quite nicely done with Haiku. I just wish there could have been a chain of them to put us over the 16 line minimum.

    Still, I envy anyone who can write Haiku/Senryu with such expertise. I have a long way to go to get this this caliber.

    Thank you so much for this wonderful entry. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Huntress silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    Awesome poem I get the feeling of an old person too Very cool

  • Warrior7
    June 28, 2008

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    Just from these 3 lines i had great imagery of an old person sitting there making this terra cotta pot. Your a genius.


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    June 28, 2008

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    Sis

    I love it, I am so glad you put this up. I also like the stark contrast of all the white space and the very small font, no fuss, no muss


    Oh and don't let me forget my


    Tammy