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Fool's Gold

I can see you, up there,
on your own pedestal,
as I stare through your eyes like a kaleidoscope:
swirling images of glory,
nowhere near the truth.

And my body language is a foreign tongue,
and my eyes are closed to you,
and my syllables seem to be at a pitch
that your sub-human ears can't detect,
from so far down beneath you.

As you worship and caress your reflection,
you'll never feel me
as I slip into the night,
never remembered except as a nagging feeling
of something important forgotten.

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Prompt: "Who do you think you are?"

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  • VoltaicHypnosis
    July 4, 2008
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    WOW! This BLEW ME AWAY! WOWOWOWOWOWOWWW!!!!!!!

    Thanks for the entry and good luck!!