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Scorned Mother

At one time she was huge and beautiful, with a lean muscular body, very large wing span, an arrow like pointed tail.  She had shimmering blue and purple scales.

She is a Mountain Dragon and resides in the snowy peaks so she can blend in.

She is bitter and full of hate because of her past with humans.  They cruelly killed her baby girl when she was hunting for food.  She sought out revenge and then hid away wallowing in her madness and sorrow.

Now she is weak and pale, but with some twist of circumstances she has to face her fears and re-enter life and it will not be easy for her.  However she will be victorious in this and become strong and vibrant and find a reason to live again.




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  • Blood Bloom
    June 28, 2008

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    It does. Unfortunatly, the character won't fit in the first book. Thanks for the help! Oh, and bravo! I loved the way it was written!

  • lorijo25
    June 28, 2008
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    Just an idea, hope it helps.