W ondering everyday where you are; how you're doing
E xpecting to get an answer when it is impossible
M esmerized by the fact that you're gone without a goodbye
I nvisible soul; no one knows if you still walk the earth
S ince that very day, we all think about you
S uch a big heart; confused...but caring and loving
Y esterday was a day I wish I could retract to
O pen to the fact that you were just here with us
U nder the flames in which we burnt your body
P lease remember everyone who loves you
R eminisce all of the good times; we'll be doing the same
I cannot promise you I won't cry; I love you too much
T ruly a friend I would have kept for as long as I lived
P arents who lost their only son; now I try to console them
A nything anyone says can never bring their son back
U nderstand that you're gone forever; a difficult task
L ive life to the fullest wherever you are; we will see you soon
Author notes
Another poem dedicated to a best friend who passed away; June 28 is his birthday. We love you Pritpaul, and miss you dearly; in my heart forever.
A contest entry
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It is so sad...
But a very powerful write.
I love the flow...
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Im very sorry for your loss, i knwo the pain of losing a loved one, ive lost many in the past 3 years. I really liked the flow and w*ord choice of this piece you did a wodnerful job! Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for entering my contest. I am really sorry for your loss. dealing with the death of a loved one can be one of the most difficult things to go through in ones life. I was amzed by your poem it was wonderful. I loved that you did an acrostic.. as it is nice for structure. Great write and good luck
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And now I'm depressed. Very good and very sad. I was a little unsure because most acrostics turn out rather lame. I was impressed by how good this one turned out.
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wow here i am crying. I love your poetry! so heartfelt.. reminds me of my friend kirk. keep on penning hon i have to go now so i can quit crying
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beautiful poem...pritpaul would love it. im amazed at how you can make your acrostics flow so well. its a really great write...you did him proud.
*hugs*
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another poem that almost made me cry! a very touching poem filled with such deep emotions and thoughts! sorry dear friend, god's taken away your best friend, but he's become your guardian angel now! keep the faith alive kays... and awesome write by the way! keep penning!
LOVE YOU!
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